Authors often lament—quite reasonably—that many of the rejections they receive are not specific. “I liked it but I didn’t love it,” the letters say, and offer no more feedback on why. And some of that is because there is only so much time in a day, so agents can’t offer feedback to all the projects they turn down and still actually have time to fulfill the obligations to the clients they’ve signed on. But it’s also true that sometimes that is simply the answer. The main characters seem well rounded enough, the premise compelling enough, the plot well-paced enough, the voice strong enough, the writing well composed enough. You read the book and you can imagine it being published by someone, but…you simply cannot say it’s a book that you love. You don’t have a vision for it. You don’t know what the spark is that’s missing, only that it’s missing. You don’t begrudge that book publication certainly, but you also don’t have the enthusiasm for it to tell other people they must read it, or to edit it, or to champion it in a million ways for years to come. Even those of us who don’t read books for a living can probably think of books they felt this way about—the book was fine, you suppose, but also you didn’t feel compelled to recommend it to anyone.
But the flip side of this is when an author turns in a revised manuscript, and it’s like they’ve flipped a switch. Maybe it’s one big edit, maybe it’s a million tiny edits, but that perfect, beautiful book that you thought you saw hiding inside the previous draft is right there, shiny and on display. It’s not magic, it’s the result of hard and often tedious and sometimes quite exhausting work, but that special extra spark changes everything. And as an agent, you feel a degree of excitement that it’s hard to properly convey—because now you get to go out and champion this perfect, beautiful thing in a million ways for years to come.
Fortunately for us all, whether or not a person sees that spark is completely subjective. That manuscript an agent passed on because they just weren’t head over heels? Someone else is telling every single person they speak to how much they adore it.

May 13, 2016
Lauren
I operate on the assumption that read requests (and it’s rare enough that a lot of agents even bother to reply to a query, however well presented) are like an audience with a 15th Century bishop; all decisions are final and irrevocable, Roma locuta, causa finita est. Don’t waste their time with revision offers-ain’t gonna happen. Of course, there’s no law that says you can’t run a different property their way later under a psuedonym later on, and if that goes nuclear pull you other prize out of the bag and say, “By the way, I have this revised other property which happens to just be laying around..” And if neither property gets off the ground, or they don’t bother to reply to either query, remember W. C. Field’s law of persistence: “If at first you don’t succeed, try, try, again. Then quit. No sense being a damn fool about it.” There’s always plenty other ports of call. And don’t do like a writer I knew once and send people nyah,nyah,nyah, letters when you break through somewhere; kinda ruins the majesty of the occasion and causes your friends to haul you away in a straitjacket…